i love the shots of the one girl catching, and sliding -- and the interview light is perfect. indoor lighting looked to be hard, gym lights = :/ lol. i like the mix of focus on individuals and then tying it back to the team. Nice job!
I would like to see them playing. You have some good footage, but I would love to see some natural video of them, also some portraits or stills of them playing. Separating some of the video time you have.
I think if you use more video clips and less time on one frame, you will have more visual variety and keep people honed in. I like the idea for sure.
i do think this needs to be a little more focused...i think it'll be absolutely great if you focus it on the captain and keep it there. if you want to interview your other sister about the captain, that would be good, but to add in more makes it more complex than it needs to be. the imagery is soooo good, i don't want the complexness of the interview to take away from it. p.s.- thanks for all your help the last couple days!!!
good job dude! it turned out great! i can't really say i would like you to change anything! you had a good mix between natural sound and interview.
ReplyDeletei love the shots of the one girl catching, and sliding -- and the interview light is perfect. indoor lighting looked to be hard, gym lights = :/ lol. i like the mix of focus on individuals and then tying it back to the team. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI would like to see them playing. You have some good footage, but I would love to see some natural video of them, also some portraits or stills of them playing. Separating some of the video time you have.
ReplyDeleteI think if you use more video clips and less time on one frame, you will have more visual variety and keep people honed in. I like the idea for sure.
good job on the different camera angles.
ReplyDeletei think you should follow them into the season and see why kind of footage you can get.
i do think this needs to be a little more focused...i think it'll be absolutely great if you focus it on the captain and keep it there. if you want to interview your other sister about the captain, that would be good, but to add in more makes it more complex than it needs to be. the imagery is soooo good, i don't want the complexness of the interview to take away from it.
ReplyDeletep.s.- thanks for all your help the last couple days!!!